Letter (Dilemma)
Dear’s residents of the town:
Due to that the sales decreased in six months ago, and it is too risky to have only one source of investment.
We decided to make good financial decisions and will invest the money from the sale well. We will not want to sale. However the decision is final.
The company does not play the same role as 40 year ago, because anothers companies have the majority mark .
Most residents work for Hershey Medical Center and Hershey Entertainment which manages the town’s $ 200, 000 million tourism industry and industry chocolate decrease, and it is not good for the company.
Many employees do not live in the town any more, because the employees found a better life in another state.
Finally Hershey town needs to move with the time and not live in the past. Because the company is not the same since 10 years ago.
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Dear’s residents of the town:- Dear...
You need to add a sentence in the beginning that expresses clearly your opinion about whether to sell or not.
Due to that the sales decreased in six months ago, and it is too risky to have only one source of investment. - This is a sentence fragment: it does not express a complete thought. You could combine this information with the opinion you will write as your opening statement.
We will not want to sale - We do...
anothers companies - other companies
have the majority mark .
Do you mean have the major brands?
Entertainment which - Entertainment, which
and industry chocolate decrease, and it is not good for the company.
This is not clear.
since 10 years ago - as it was 10 years ago
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